First chapter draft of 'Mobile Troopers'

She continued to stare in a eerily silence at the large planet Cadona, that lay in a vast and sprawling blanket of stars and open space, and in kind, Cadona too, stared back, that without hesitation embraced the lone girl and the small quarters in a warm glow of orange light. There was a sudden hiss of the room's door opening, and a voice called out to her. “Yuri?” The voice was recognizable, of course, belonging to no one other than Elyssia. Yuri turned her head for a brief second to look at her, as if to confirm it was her, before swiftly returning her gaze to the star system. “It's almost time to assemble at the mess hall. Company commander has a important announcement.” She said dryly. Still, Yuri did not reply. “I just wanted you to know. Everyone's been sort of worried about you the past few days, is everything alright?” After finishing that, Elyssia parted from the door toward a floating crisscrossed Yuri.